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i love the new chap and it's getting more interesting
This book is one of my favorite book. keep it up. :)
Aww thanks! （*^＠^*）
Hi! Chapter 8 is up. Please check it out. Thanks! :)
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Can you update me please? I love your book your an amazing writer with so much feeling I can really visuals the book
um, gotta go for now~ nice talking to u. ttyl! ^.~
Hi! Chapter 8 is up. Please check it out. Thanks! :)
Kay
nice chapter love it
Thanks!ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
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hey another nice chapter but u knw i want more to read it...plz update soon again Kenzhie.. its really very nice.. and i m on edge to knw more... thanku :)
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Even though people say don't judge a book by its cover but this book has an amazing cover and its also a great book 2 keep it up!
Thanks! (=^u*=)
Hi! Chapter 8 is up. Please check it out. Thanks! :)
Hi! Chap 9 is up. Please check it out. :)
hey plz update soon plz plz plz....
ur welcome. :D
hehe thanks :P
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love your book, nice cover hope you'll up date soon
Thank you^^ I'll try to update it this coming Friday, hopefully.:) and thanks for adding it to ur fave.^0^
Hi! chap 7 is up. Please check it out.^^
ok thanks
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Hi! Chapter 8 is up. Please check it out. Thanks! :)
Whens the next update?
oh, i see *facepalm*lol thanks!^^
really? maybe it's what u think but others don't think that way. Why not post ur selfie as ur prof pic? hehe I don't think that u look like a hippo though. :)
Umm.. I dontthink you've seen me. Lol. Ill PM you
ok. XD
I love the concept of your book, and the fact that you use humor to move the story along. There are some problems, but I'm sure you'll be able to fix them easily. For instance, you keep changing from present tense to past tense, and from first person to third. That, I think, is the biggest issue, but as I said, easily fixed.
You have a clever, realistic way of conveying the story, and I can see a lot of potential with it. A... mehr anzeigen
wow thank you very much for this wonderful and honest feedback. I would most definitely fix the said problems/errors. Thanks for telling me since I really haven't noticed that. I'm really bad at proofreading and editing and my grammar isn't that perfect. :D And I am glad you... mehr anzeigen
Out of the last twenty or so stories that I've tried to read on here, yours is the first one that made sense, had an actual plot, kept my interest, and made me giggle all at the same time. Adding it to my Favorites was a no-brainer. =)
And that I feel honored. :) Thank you very much!^^
thanks! （*^＠^*）
Hi! Chapter 8 is up. Please check it out. Thanks! :)
Hi! Chap 9 is up. Please check it out. :)