You have started to create another very good story, Kenzhie.
I love the way in which you portray, Sydney as being the beautiful, rich girl, but with many flaws. I also love the way in which you have built the suspense with regards to her stalker, giving the reader three options to choose from. At the moment, the finger of suspicion is pointing at Cole, Harry or the maid. However, as the story develops and given the... mehr anzeigen
You have started to create another very good story, Kenzhie.
I love the way in which you portray, Sydney as being the beautiful, rich girl, but with many flaws. I also love the way in which you have built the suspense with regards to her stalker, giving the reader three options to choose from. At the moment, the finger of suspicion is pointing at Cole, Harry or the maid. However, as the story develops and given the protagonist's personality I wouldn't be surprised if a couple more names are thrown into the mix.
If you continue to expand it and then polish it until it glows this story will be a great read.
Hi! I've finally updated a new chapter. Please do check it out if you have time. Thanks! :)
I have just reread this book, Kenzhie, and love the way in which you are still building the suspension.
Thank you! :)