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Rgabel

Fast moving, well plotted and interesting. Good cliff hanging end! Robynn

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fflores1

thank u :) @four,oclock and selishxiiii! and i am writting another one and it's the fourth! i havent thought about the title but i', glad u guys really like it :) i'm glad u guys enjoyed my story :)

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four.oclock

Another hanging, intriguing closure scene. Nice one :) I am enjoying this story of yours and would love to know how you'd finish the whole. :) I'd give you a vote. :)