i finished editing survival and tomorrow i'll edit secrets :) thank u all for giving me advices and wanting me to do better :) thank u :)
What a hanging ending. So he will turn her to a vampire, too? That's my guess, well he can't let her die right? :)
Enjoying the sequel thus far and happy Jack's back (peace...at times I'm just on the dark side lol) Kevin and Jack's past was interesting and I'm sure you can develop more on this.
My suggestion would be to look into some typos, spelling errors and tense changes. But don't worry these didn't take much from the... mehr anzeigen
hey! :) thank u soo much! i'm glad u enjoyed it and about the the typos and all i will fix it:) it's no problem for me:) thank u for being honest and yes! i will be making another one and u will find out what happens to Shirley :) i appreciate ur help and all thank u once again :)