hey i thought it was pretty good i guess

ThanK U :) but I dont think I got the vote :) hahaha

I came back to see whether you have my vote or not. I did, I should have left you a comment to let you know that i voted.

this is really good book

Very good story! you should fix a few mistake you have there and then editvery good job you should write more about poetry of fiction too.

:) It's a lot better now than the first. It must be hard if you had done it all by phone. You have my vote. Good luck in the contest :)

thank u! :) i worked hard on it :)

lov it

IT"S FINISHED!!! took me a wahile and its better please read and tell me what u think i fixed it and its better than before i fornd doo many mistakes its horrible!!! :) BUT IM HAPPY AND I THANK ALL OF U FOR HELPING ME AND TAKING UR TIME READ AND TELL ME THANK U!!

im sooo happy my computer works!! hahaha and now u guys can read it better and tell me what u think im fixing it now :)