aw, Coles gay, thats really cute!!! :D Never read much stories where guys are gay lol
I loved that little speech you gave :D And it cool, a couple of my friends are gay :D
So the next book is Human Testing, right??? Brilliant, be reading that and this time i may understand it XD
Anyway, almost cried when those arseholes where beating up Terone, and frickin Sophia, I could punch that bitch!!!
It was so adorable when Uta kissed Terones eye... Now I feel bad for being mean to Terone >.< Why cant i just be mean to someone with out feeling guilt!!! Gaaah lol
Overall there is some grammar mistakes, capital letters in sentences when they are not needed, some missing words. Not many spelling mistakes, gotta admit lol
Loved all their stories and how they fought threw it with each other. And Hills!!! Who spit in his curry??? Seriously, stabbing Terone and KNOWING he was innocent...
And I was really sad about Emily, another thing I feel bad about joking about... dam lol
Is there something between Satra and Megan or are they just good friends???? :P
Overall, fantastic story and its a crime that this book isn't the top off bookrix. Love and hated your characters. you really get a feel for them and they just act and feel so...real... its spooky!! :D
Can't wait for the new books to come XD Happiness

Sorry. not that far in yet but i just need to mention this before i forget, but on page 32 when the woman find Kami, you use 3 separate paragraphs when the one person is speaking. You need to make it into just 1. If you want to space it out, do it like this.
"Hello?Anyone here..." etc but just skip one line like this
"more talking and the running down stairs blah blah blah" instead of

A big gap :) It gives the reader the impression that you are going to have someone else talk :D
OK, back into this wonderful book!!!

And here I thought that Cole was just some cool minor character -W-
Suspense ._. *sniff* 'Tis the new bane of my existence. Screw you, suspense ;A;
Anywaaaaaaays, I liked it XP A lot.

I went back to reread the new chapters. WHY?!

First I wanted to punch Teron in the face. (Even though Ren would probably kick my ass several times over if I did P:). Sorry.

Then I wanted to hug him. Again.

Then I cried.

DAMMIT, STOP PLAYING WITH MY EMOTIONS! D:

DAMMIT NAOMI!
You made me cry! >.>
I. DON'T. CRY! WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!?!?
Terone! I need to cuddle your face!

You're messing with my emotions! I went from wanting to slap the crap out of Terone. Then I wanted to hug the crap out of him! AND I CRIED! I. FRUNKING. CRIED! Then I was laughing, because Terone's crappily amusing! Then I was all happy and stuff, because they were becoming friends! AND THEN I WAS SAD AGAIN! AND ANGRY! Hills is yet another person on my list that needs to go die in a fucking hole >8I
And Terone's parents.... But they can live... for now.

And my favorite character is Ren. I'd tell you why, but I have to go! I'll give you the reason whenever you're online. XD

My favorite?
....
Dammit!! I can't choooose DX I like them all too much!!!
Aggg!!

....

Ohgosh. Write more. Pleeease. ;A;

By the way, in Egyptian mythology, the ren is one of the five parts of the soul. It's your secret name or identity.

WHYDOTHESEPEOPLEWRITESOWELL?!

I finally got caught up on it *twitch*
....Why did you have to leave off. RIGHT. THERE. WHY?!
*defeated sigh and a sniffle* Buttface.

It's almost 3 in the morning. I'm crazy stupid tired, but do I go to bed. No!
I sit at the computer and read this wordpile instead :P
I love it :P TTAS is great. And now I have a whole lot more respect for Kami & Satra than I used to (I haven't read Ren or Terone's yet)

I've updated the first three chapters.
THE FRONT COVER'S MUCKED UP BECAUSE OF THE NEW FORMAT. *Silent rage*