Interesting concept so far. I like that you really tried to portray your character's especially Kami, he's such an interesting person to follow throughout the story. I really liked the scene when Kami's father is confronted and Kami comes to the realization that he does have some sort of inner strength.
I like that it's not your average "coming of age" story with the typical journey. I enjoy that the boys instead take an... mehr anzeigen
Interesting concept so far. I like that you really tried to portray your character's especially Kami, he's such an interesting person to follow throughout the story. I really liked the scene when Kami's father is confronted and Kami comes to the realization that he does have some sort of inner strength.
I like that it's not your average "coming of age" story with the typical journey. I enjoy that the boys instead take an emotional journey while helping Uta.
Great job on this.