Keep writing please, it's gret!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!can you do more?

I couldn't have seen a better opening! I really enjoyed the book, you should definitely finish it. I'm seriously lost for words!

tell me when you UPDATE!!!!!!! :)

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

write more please !!!

By the Way, please continue writing this book !!! You have a talent :) ;)

I loved the book, It was incredible...but there are some mistakes: 1) when you want to say that someone was running in past tense you say RAN and not RUN ( example: yesterday, I ran to school). 2) I noticed that you are forgeting to put "a" / "an" / "the" before some words / sentences-for example : (the) entire school and not entire school, "I wasn't rich when I was (a) small kid" and not without the "a" [ and you didn't need to put the word small, since kids are already classified as small--just saying], and there were some places in which you forgot to put "an"

Please don't think that I am insulting you, in my oppinion the book is great and having such minor grammatical errors is a problem that can be fixed easily.

I hope u finish this book it is soooooooooooo great!!!!!!!!

:D