and honored by your support and comments, Dre.
Thanks so much for setting the tone for my male readers :)
I sincerely hoped that I captured the perspectve of the male parent. I'm glad you enjoyed! (Hope you voted ;)

By the end of the Story it felt a though I knew all of the Characters personally. Looking forward to reading more of your work!!!

Kalai, you are the first to offer comments and I wanted you to know how much I appreciate them and the time you took to read my story!

Nicely written. There is a flow in the story.