That's the most craziest story I ever read! Amazing!!

I wasn't expecting that ending. Good short story!

if my mum donr that to me how i could punch her in the face before she had the chance to kill me then whilst shes down get a knife and stab her , its violent but its better than losing my life

I really liked the ending, was not expecting that.

I felt cold after the first page. Clever hook, mother and child. Looking foward to more...

absolutly brilliant !

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If was good but you chod fill thrill of eximent till u heared yes we r dead then the crowd whod be like cheering and wowed and that is a amazing part of the book and i want to read the rest!

If was good but you chod fill thrill of eximent till u heared yes we r dead then the crowd whod be like cheering and wowed and that is a amazing part of the book and i want to read the rest!

If was good but you chod fill thrill of eximent till u heared yes we r dead then the crowd whod be like cheering and wowed and that is a amazing part of the book and i want to read the rest!