Your book is one of the most amazing things I have read in awhile. I loved it and it gave me chills. Keep up the awesome work.
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Your book is one of the most amazing things I have read in awhile. I loved it and it gave me chills. Keep up the awesome work.
that was the scariest book ive ever read. Well done.
that was the scariest book ive ever read. Well done.
That was a great short story, it was vivid and unique. I was interested in it from page one through the end. I look forward to reading more of your books in the future. Thank you.
I like the ending and how the subject of the story and how you made it so real!!!i hope you have more so i will be looking for more
Hi animefreak198029,
I'm glad that you liked my story - I enjoyed writing it, thats for sure... I have another that is entered in the "Get Published" contest that I'm sure that you will like as well - It can be found here - ... mehr anzeigen
hm, the ending was different than i thought it woudl be, and of course some of the things that were in here were anticipated (death), but not some of it. The ending is kind of confusing for me, but its only one question. Did the children start the fire in the first place or what started it?
There was one grammar issue but other than that this is very good.
Hi Dawnfire,
The fire starts when the screwdriver that he dropped down the shaft years before gets jammed in the furnace - he drops it while looking for the cause of the fire that he dreams about that kills all of the children, not knowing that it happens in the future. In... mehr anzeigen
I'm pretty much scared for life 8D Thanks.
I'm pretty much scared for life 8D Thanks.
Holy Hell! that was great jees you should write more like this
this was a great story.. i loved it so much..
I'm glad that you liked it! The book that is much better (in my opinion) is here - http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-dale-a-moses-he-still-watches-1 - only the first two chapters, but the first one is pretty bad - the rest (to where I am finished to anyways, can be found here - ... mehr anzeigen
I'm glad that you liked it! The book that is much better (in my opinion) is here - http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-dale-a-moses-he-still-watches-1 - only the first two chapters, but the first one is pretty bad - the rest (to where I am finished to anyways, can be found here - http://www.hestillwatches.com/onlineflip/index.html ...
Please, if you like it, give it a vote - I need to get to the top ten, and I am 17th right now... :-(
Thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to read!
Dale A. Moses