Excellently written. Truly marvelous. Spoken in perfect reality. Keep it up!

^.^

I was able to get my fonts larger so my story is much easier to read. Thanks to everyone who squinted through the previous version!

On the bottom right hand side of your pc screen is the words 100%. If you as the reader enlarge that to 200% then you'll be able to read the story.

I understand what happened to Chris because it happened to me on my first upload.

I hope this helps.

Hi there,

I've given your book 'Two North' a read.

I found your story engaging. I worried at the beginning but you did grab me toward the middle and kept me there until the end, which was great. You wrote your story as a memior and as such it was mostly exposition with a little backstory. I thought perhaps you could have tried to show your story instead of tell it, but none the less, I still enjoyed it at the close.

I was a bit confused in a few areas (without trying to be too picky, but if I was confused I thought possibly others might be too). 1: your sentence 'I was older than I should have needed to be I suppose' I think you are meaning you were forced to be older than your years. 2: I heard her scream and could hear her crying but I sure couldn't. I can't make out your meaning here.

Good luck.

Also, I have two stories 'Chameleon' and 'Shame' that I'd love for you to read. They are both entered into the 'Family Stories' contest.

Thanks,

Bek.

this is 100% good i realy think you did a perfect job (nice work)

It appears that I can't re-upload it and since I uploaded it from a Word DOC originally, I have no idea how to increase the font size. If anyone wants to see it in a larger size, I've made a web page for it here where you can:

http://eclectacopia.efx2blogs.com/32518/%26quot%3BTwo+North%26quot%3B.html

I guess I need to re-upload the DOC file after I increse the font. I'll do that tonight. I had several complaints about that and didn't realize I could re-upload it.

Hi Chris! I was not able to read your book because the printing is too small. a simple edit to your fonts will let everyone read this with comfort. Please let me know when you change this because I would love to read your story./joeparente

Terrible subject...great story.

A wonderful story about a wonderful son.