You do have a gift with description. It draws you in and makes you experience what the character feels. I enjoyed reading it.

as i'm building my friend list, i'm grateful for your referrals and votes. good day, gooduklady and sereni!

Another true gem! I was so excited reading this story, because you have a gift with words. You have the ability to make us feel exactly what this man was going through. I felt his pain and confusion, and experienced every sound and emotion - and, in the end, felt happy, breathing a sigh of relief.

I will also remember this one when it comes time to vote. Well done indeed!

I enjoyed reading such a well written story. When it comes time to vote I will remember yours. Serena

thank you lizzy21

i liked this a lot, Bram!