I really hope you continue with this. I think this story has a ton of potential. It's hard to say right now if Jack or David would be better and that is where I think you can really develop the characters. This can be a triangle romance or a case of having two mates. It can go either way. The story has a great start and I think there is a ton of potential here.
Me loving this Series, ppl. But my heart will go on and on for Jack.
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I would go for jack if David was real I would punch him in the face for calling her that such a scum bag
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jake would me my choice because he had d courage to come and say it first....he was soo expressive even though he tried to ignore her he did not hurt her........he always tried to get her back..........actually i think he s the best.........even though David seems to good in outside..his behavior is rude and actually he was rushing things in intimacy tooo....but he never said that he LOVES her......jake was the person who... mehr anzeigen
to be honest I think David is the better choice. He is sweet, sensitive, and does not rush into things. Plus I'd rather have a guy tell me his feelings and what he thinks about me than to keep assuring me that I am perfect, because I know I'm not. So contact me more at my profile. my name is Carmen Evans. David ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!!
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I think Jake is better than David.
I love your books!!
please update. and i think Jake is better than David.
PLease update and Jack is better than David basically cause he's my type :)
I agree with u on that , it could be a really good storyline.