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im verly starting it and i already like it. its a great story!

very very good

Good work man. Read like a published work. Very well written. Sentence structure was great! Choice of words and how they were put together was great!

WOW I cannot believe that someone online made that not a professional writer. Beautiful in every aspect. :)

Your prose is commendable, very dramatic, but your shift in tenses, present to past perfect first person and back puzzles and enthralls me. Is this on purpose, because sometimes it works and then sometimes it confuses.

I had the impression he was talking to himself.

BTW Sense comes. Senses came.

Interesting how the author view the taking of a class A drug as a murder or body and soul - happy helpless and unable to resist as wanting to please partner and self - to choose death over reason. Or was it a choice?

I am speechless. I can't find the words to describe this insanely good book. AMAZING!

like lies and myths, they tooo become a addiction into the dark and irreversible state of mis-fortune

This is a great book keep wrighting