great book
i'M ONLY ELEVEN AND i COULD FEEL THIS STORY.I CAN FEEL THIS PERSONS PAIN!ITS SIMPLY AMAZING!
Wow. Just, wow.
I am a 12 year old aspiring author and this story was amazingly written. Great syntax and i loved the story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories :)
very powerful short story leaves knots in the stomach
That was way to weird! I'm not sure what it was suppose to be about! Ok then!!!
All I can say is, your story and writing style is very dark and intense and suits the subject you write about. I was drawn into your suffering mind and heart. When you see someone cutting into their flesh you hurt for them but you can't say you enjoyed watching it. You write well on a subject you seem to know well. I will read your other work.
All the best, take care.
Jack
I am myself a recovering alcoholic/addict...and some of the descriptions are so relatable to me...when the author talks about the mask..I used to feel the same way about my partner at the time. I just wanted "her" back...and I was willing to go to any lengths to wait for her.
You should have told me you could write also. An artist and a writer. Cant wait to see what you do next.