wow i'm really impress!!!:)
it was so good it makes me wanna write my own!
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wow i'm really impress!!!:)
it was so good it makes me wanna write my own!
very nice descriptions, very vivid images.
Heroin is the drug, the girl as she was before the addiction is who died. Addiction has taken over, killing the girl he once knew, and leaving in her body an empty shell of a human being, a monster, someone who simply impersonates the girl he once loved..
To the author: You need to take some responsibility. She didnt force you to become addicted, you're a big boy and you are capable of making your own decidions.
It's not all too late for either of you though, there's always hope. I shot, and in a few short months I'll be 2 years clean.
YOU CAN BE THE STRENGTH THAT GIRL NEEDS TO BE BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE.
But first, you have to bring the old YOU back to life, you, you killed him too.
Interesting & confusing.I understood someone was killed, what I didn't get was who the third party was. Was it the drug?What drug was this person addicted to?
Very intense and well-written - Feelings of sadness for the man battling such demons
It goes on everyday in this out of control world we have, which is so terribly sad
tht was so sad. like super super sad. at first i thought the girl actually DIED but now i get it. :P how sad. Idk y he didn't stop tho. Y he didnt stick up for himself...
That Was Very Touching ... You're A GREAT Author !