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petra michelle

Am so happy to hear it moved you in such a way, David! :))

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petra michelle

"Comfort literary food!" Thank you, Tariq! :))

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petra michelle

That's so wonderful to hear, Loving! :))

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davidpeace

Very imaginative! It made me want to join them in their fun. Very poignant ending.

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tariq.summeiyya

Based on your dedication I can see that you poured your heart,soul,memories and love into this work. Thank you for sharing this inspirational and imaginative story with us!

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lovingempath

This is such a delightful story, that I think it would be a hit with any age-group.
Very 'light', fanciful imagery...excellent dialog. All around great work of art!

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petra michelle

Hilarious, Wizard! Wouldn't it be nice to have more room to flesh out the characters?! Suspended disbelief in the Saturnites enjoying rollerblading. E.g., Why does Mary Poppins fly with an umbrella?

Thank you for your fun comment, Wizard! :))

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wizard

A great story ! The kind that makes you want to learn more about the characters. How did Saturn ever learn about roller blading ? Would Oreo's be a hit on Saturn ? What do they think of baseball ? So many more things you'd like to know.....Makes you feel like a kid again...

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petra michelle

Thank you so, Cav! Appreciate the positive feedback! :))

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