Thank you I need to write somthing the will catch peoples attention.( tell your friends)

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This is dark and intense. I can't write like this, but I'm glad you can. Good studff.

Thanks for that I wanted to go in a different direction for this drabble contest.

Not exactly material for the next romantic comedy, eh?

Nicely plotted out and accomplished... and very appropriately titled too.

Your writing improves with every new piece - it's wonderful to see.

thank you guys I wanted to do something different and ripples I read your book but couldn't comment on it due to babysitting.

Dark indeed, but I like them, very good!

Dark, Dark, Dark, Is right! It made me think! Now let the editors here polish it up for you, they'll put you on track.

Wow!

thank you for your comment it was really helpful.

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You need a lot of work done on these. I would suggest you let Wendy help you. As they are, I cannot comment except to say your sentences are not complete.

Ok thank you and I will now

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