my wonder of lollipops, that baby girl lilla sure is a miracle

OMG's WRITE MORE WHATS HER PLAN?

I love it!! please please please keep writing more!!

0.0 oh My god...give me sec,... first off all the explosion and the knife, Awesome.I hope she hurt the poor guy.I'm loving Devil more and more. And the more you explain about her the more I respect her. >.

Awesome! PLEASE WRITE MORE IT WAS JUST GETTIN' TO THE GOOD PART!!!!! :D

Excellent content. Needed a bit of proofing, but OK to get through. Felt it could have ended less abruptly, unless a sequel is in the works. Good job! Mary

keep it comin, it is so good!I can't wait tofind out what happens next, if Winthrop is going to finally find out the truth about Devil?!

I know I have already commented on here, but for me I think that it is time for Devils past to come out to light, to see where this is going to take her. Is she going to end up with the one man that actually falls in love with her for her:)

Its good it would be cool if the story turned to danger. :D

LOVED THIS STORY...LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE..DO IT SOON!