You captured the fear of the dark pretty well. I enjoyed the internal details such as your observations as you woke up and tried to calm yourself down.
Thanks for notifying us to give this a look, it was an interesting read.
(ps: good to hear that you're slightly happier now)
-Angely

You totally capture the sense of isolation and despair that fuel this understandable fear. I'll be back to give it a vote!

I really liked it! It was well written and the details were excellent so I could picture everything really well. Over all great job! If you wanted to after the biggest fear contest you could add to this book. It seems like a great beginning to a big adventure. :)

~Alexis