EXCELLENT STORY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVED IT...
EXCELLENT STORY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVED IT...
Looking for something longer? Feel free to drop by The Conquest of Lemuria. =-)
Nice....i like it... :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. =-)
Great tale...I wish I knew how they got back. Plus if he will keep his promise to get her mother out of that place.You should write a sequel.
Well written - grammar wise.
Laz
i hope its good
Go ahead and read. LOL.
It actually brought a tear to my eyes! I love happy endings!
the book was amazing. i hope you keep writing because i am going to read all your novels. Even though i dont like reading short stories i liked this one. keep writing
I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;-)
Glad you liked it! Swing by The Conquest of Lemuria. =-)