Good story. like the part that she found love right under her nose.

Hey, you're really immaginative!
I really liked the plot, shame it's only a short story ;) It'd love to read more of it.

You write with passion that shows your love for the art. Great concept. Well written. I voted for you. Good luck.

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It's good to see more readers dropping by. Thanks again for your time, comments and votes. Take care. =-)

More grease to your elbow

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It makes me very proud to read your comments. I do my best to whip up tales that can reach the heart while also being enjoyable to my readers. Many thanks for stopping by and giving my story a chance to get notice. =-)

Great Story line! Words seemed to have flowed from your heart. I wish you ALL THE BEST. Keep Writing and wish you success in life. GOD JOB!

Excellent writing and story line.
A pleasure to read.

~David