Very good short story--good ending.

You have penned another classic. I enjoyed the plot, the characters and the descriptions. Well done!

good writing style...

good writing style...

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your comments. I love to see what my readers thought of my work. Writing is hard and more when trying to bring a complex and creative plot and idea to a story. But after all the hard work, I as the writer am proud and pleased of how it paid off. Thanks again for your votes and sharing your thoughts. =-)

It is a great story of love. For some people that are blind to the love that is in front of them while they are going in chasing that same love in other places or people. Any way this is my take.
Martin

In general this is a very intersting original love story.
Written with the style and grace of a master wordsmith.

The characters are well developed and very believeable.

The plot while complex is followed easily by the readers and is very gripping.

The structure of the story while for the most part is stright line narritive it has unusual flashbacks, that include others that you never come into contact with other than mention by the primary characters.

This is told with the classic story tellers crafty method of bringing the reader into the story, making them a part of the story rather than looking at it through a lens of a telascope as it were.

It is one of the best short stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading in any genre. I would recommend it to anyone who has a love of short stories, with one caveat.

That is you will wish it was a full novel. This writer has true talent and will someday I'm sure rank up there with the likes of J.K.Rowlings.
reviewed by R.K.Rickerd

I focused on the story in this read and found myself visualizing much of it. You have the gift of story telling and are well on the way to the Holy Grail of thriller, or fantasy writing- the twist at the end.
Deserves a star in my books.

I still can't work the comment thingy! Nothing comes up when I place the cursor over the +. And where did the star go?

A romantic trip through time, Cav! I've often wondered and imagined my encounters and romances in past lives! And may they live happily ever after! :))