When do we get the rest?

I'm not an author so it's hard to be a critic. Just seemed kind of childish written. Maybe second half will enlighten us more.

that was very interesting and i would love to read more!

Poorly written, grammar, word usage, etc.

I liked it, but it was really confusing. I'd like to know how it ends.

Waste of time.

i tried to download it for my sony and it closes my library....

nice book. i was hoping you could read my book, The Big Bo-Bot. Tell me what you think and possibly what i could do to improve. As for your book i liked it. thanks!

that was good she had great detail and made the picture quite clear in my mind now if she would only wright more then it would be a little more interesting

OH WAS THAT SUPPOSED TO SCARE ME LOL I ALMOST LAUGHED I WAS SO SCARED