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add more please
Thank you, and no, he was not trying to make her jealous, in the last chapter I wrote it said he didn't want to hurt the girl, not to make Evelyn jealous, and whether or not she is a psychic or witch or something else will be revealed soon, and why.
I love the concept of this book :) I just didnt understand how if she was his mate how he would so quickly turn his back on her. Was he just trying to make her jealous? I think it would enhance your story more if you add in his POV a little just so the readers can understand and relate to him a little more. And what happened to her uncle??? And what exactly is SHE? Just some sort of psychic or a witch? Im sure these questions... mehr anzeigen
I LOVE YOUR BOOK PLEASE MAKE MOREXD
I'm sorry, I'm certain there are some turn-offs right now because I must still go and edit my work, I hope I can make it more to your liking, thank you for your comment and not all wolves are bad, in my old neighborhood, there is a forest and wolves who would walk up and sniff you, though they were quite small, and in a published book I have read, a girl approached a wolf and pet it
after reading chapter 2 and 2 1/2, i really don't understand a couple of things:
1. why does she jump off the balcony to pet a wolf. anyone in their right mind would know that wolves are dangerous and you can't pet them. they would rip your hand off with their teeth.
2. when she thinks he looks like the wolf, his eyes and hair, she watches him "in case he showed any sign of knowing the wolf" ... WHAT?! even if he knew about a... mehr anzeigen
awesome book!!! plz write more soon and let me know about it!!! :)
READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic.... mehr anzeigen
READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them for making him sleep in that house if you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: a girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to now if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments Jerry will 'visit' you his isn't fake. Apperently if you copy and past this to ten comments in the next ten minuets you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. You will either get kissed or asked out, if you brake this chain you will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. In the next 53 minuets someone will say I love you or I'm sorry