Wichtiger Beitrag
Please Update!
please update story love it!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update the story!!! Waiting for it...
Good story so far. Would love to read more. Please update soon. I don't see any issues with the email format, so no need to change that from my perspective.
Very great written story, although a side of looking of 50 shades (and I totally agree about everything of that writer) still missing the real build up. The present build up in this story is missing something. Sometimes it looks like you get to it and then you don't finish it. But still good written and looking forward to next parts of it!!!!