its been updated, let me know what you guys think plz

thanks guys, and im working on more, will be updated soon. and ill work on the capitialization

This is one of the BEST books I've read on here so far! Please, PLEASE, write more! You got quite a talent, too! I can't wait to read more!! Can't wait to see what happens! xD

This is a great boom plz finish it

This is great! But you need capitalization. I realized this in the first letter of the first page. Other than that, it was an awesome read!