Even though you are my competition....this story deserves a huge vote....so I gave you two...one from work and one from home.

Now this is the kind of story I adore. You wrote it with ease and I was able to read it without stopping for breath. I laughed out loud when the pizza fell in his lap....in fact, I was really "there" throughout the whole story. I am happy to say that I did find one mis-spelled word, which proves you are not quite PERFECT. "Pealed" instead of "peeled". Well done, Brian. Write more like this....and teach ME how to do it too.

Beautifully written, I didn't trip or stumble, and my mad inner teacher never once got nasty. I'm adding this to favorites.

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