Hi Brian,

I agree with the other readers, you did surprise me with the ending and I found this an easy read.

Good luck.

Bek :)

Very enjoyable Brian. I felt the text has an energy that keeps the reader focussed throughout. The timing of the read and the ending are perfectly balanced and judged.

Lovely use of first person and present tense to set the reader up for the ending. Great concept. Very nice.

This was short fun, a neat little look into a process little thought about. I like it.

Fabulous. Brian's writing always reminds me of Raymond Chandler. And he always has an unexpected twist at the end!

Or should that be a '42 classic. Great story, probably about the length the average 11 year old can cope with these days!!!

Nice tiwst at the end!

haha, always leave the crowd wanting more ... time honoured tradition!

Very interesting tidbit - they need to add a category for the best stand-in...great job...Paula

Perfect