so short

im working on a book called war its about vampires too!!!

part 2 is out now thank yoyu for the good comments hope you like part 2 :)

Niiiiiiiiice dude.
can't wait for part two.

I am making part 2 but it will take some time because I have to do my end of year tests and I have to revise allot.

p.s thank you annodb for the comment

awesome start, love your expression in the dialogue, a few typo's but nothing you can't fix, and shh don't worry we all suffer with typo's in grammar etc.. only the other day I came across a typo in a magazine, they typed didm't instead of didn't , so yh very good start, keep it up and cant wait to read next chapter :P