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Adam Lewis LaValley

Nice start to your first story. I enjoyed it. Keep on writing! 8)

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vivianxvos

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

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vivianxvos

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

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vivianxvos

amazing you need to write more keep me updated

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jacelyn

You should really finish this book! It's really interesting and has a great story line. Just remember in writing to proof read before you publish and correct some spelling and grammar errors :) But this was a nice read.

-Jace

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Teamdamon99

more right now lol

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mysteriouskitty

Amazing you really need to finish it i loved it :)