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Girls give in the ass in your city! On our website ➔ http://girlx.ga
How you got so many view with writing just 9000 words?....oh my...
i love this book its sexy
like you
how did u open to read it? i have tried in vain.
I love all the sex! Sooo nice!
Yep, you're a hot writer... BUT many errors. The many small errors distract from your talent so you have to edit. I think you use a spell checker so that seems good. You need to understand paragraph use around narratives, keeping your tenses constant, some continuity.
I think you got it... and I'd like to see you get better. Hang in there and check out what others are doing and how they do it. Lots of luck!
~ Dave
Correctly, this book doesn't deserve to be the most viewed book on the erotica genre because it's showing the readers that all could make a story like this and then they are considered an Erotica Writer....
Do you suppose it might have something to do with you rating it for 16 year olds? By all rights it should be 18+ or Adults Only.
Girls give in the ass in your city! On our website ➔ http://girlsx.ga
How can I Download it?
It has the "download" button right there.
wow .. this book is so awsome now i started loving the author
Are you serious?.....
Love this book! Sooo sexy!