wtf!!!this is twilight but just with different names!!!you should really change this story

okay, i'd like to warn you in advance: i am really pissed so im sorry if i sound bitchy. I was on page two or three when i had to exit. im really sorry to say, but even though you changed some minor things, like names and the population, the whole thing i had read thus far reminded me of Twilight and you were killing my favorite series' good name. add to it my irritation at youre bad grammar, punctaution and spelling and i couldnt stand it. im sorry im being such a bitch, and im usually real even-tempered about comments and reading new books, but this is insane. i strongly recommend re-doing this book COMPLETELY! because if i had to exit the window, im sure not alot of people will want to read this book. im sorry im being so harsh. its just how i feel and think. i also apologize if youre a bad comment-taker and take this horribly but im trying to help you. one author helping another. nothing personal at all.