i kno and thats not how I see Bella. But of course what's wrong with a little twist to a story. Haha. I'm not offended by your critizing. I knew this story wouldn't more than likely come out with your kind of comments. I just figured there are some people who would like to see the darker side of Bella you kno

im truly sorry, but when ever i got to the page where bella had a gun i burst out laughing. first cause bella is not that mean, two jake falls in love with Renesmee, and threeits just that immpossible...(Dont take my critizem the wrong way i rate books very harshly...)