Great writing and storyline. I wss there in the coffee shop and wanting to ask for an autograph as well. Seeing a man pick up from his tattered life, and living for a moment his glory. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

great Descriptions

what it is to be a has been and how elated recognition can bolster one's ego. I felt myself within that dusty, rundown town that had promise of more than it appeared to offer.

Evelyn, this is one of your best stories. I have enjoyed your past efforts, but this is absolutely entrancing. Even the title tells the tale! You really painted the scene descriptively and captured the atmosphere of the town from the first page. As for "Henry", you described his aura perfectly, making me, the reader, see his unshaven face and feel his sad, resigned air. There are a few minor typos that, if fixed, would make this perfect. Change the word "roll" to "role" and "sun" to "son" and that should do the trick. A couple of other words are missing their final letters, but they do not take away from this masterfully written story. I am impressed with this beyond words.