Okay..so I liked it all right but there wasn't anything to it. There wasn't a story to it. Also I rarely knew who was talking...there wasn't any paragraphs so that I know that something else is happening...over all it was all right book but I can tell your writing skills can go farther. And finish it!~ ((:
umm i think your descripition of the book is wrong
i have been working really hard to finish it im actully updating it right now will be updated by sometime today
Love it but please finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:[
i like it so far..... but the one thing that bothers me..... it is not done!
im the kind of person that will getinto anybook..... but when it is not done it drives me CRAZZZY!!! pleas finish it!