I am older than 18

Oh my.........that is.........I can't even......wow....very awe inspiring. Awesome word play.

very nice.... neat change

You have a talent, Paul. Thank you for sharing these intimate recollections in verse. I invite you to read my creation, 'Tastes of Pleasure, Hot and Juicy'. I think you would enjoy it.

What a very different way to conjure up images held in one's head

excellent read,witty,funny and sexy.

This is definitely different. You put in words what my minds eye sees in images.

Bernadette from black heath was my fave , made me laugh lol , awesome writing :P