Good story and engaging blurb to get us to read it. Short and to the point. I'd like to see a part 2, how does "Grandad" handle the situation?

Thanks so much for your response! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I shall take a look at your work and report soon.

A really lovely story. I should say this is what the readers should look for, a surprise ending that makes the reader agape with wonder. Great work! Voted.

Thanks for your copychecking Chelsea. It is always useful, as I get blind to any errors there may be. Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.

Good job, I thought it was well thought out. I like the twist at the end.

Good job, I thought it was well thought out. I like the twist at the end.

Nice story bud. Reminds me a bit of some of the kids I deal with. Good luck with the voting.
Adam

Well done!

Thank you for the invitation to read your book- I like the twist at the end.
Are you brittish? I noticed some words that are not usual for me- bolluck?
It was nice with an ending that would make me.. read on to see what happens next...
Thanx -Kgeddington

Hah! Thanks. I did wonder about continuing the character, but then I decided that it stood better as a short.
Thanks again for reading!