You got me on that one, I was ready to keep reading... Sounds like it's going places.

You got me on that one, I was ready to keep reading... Sounds like it's going places.

Thanks for your feedback! I really enjoyed writing this short, even if it is not my normal genre.

An intriguing story with a good plot and ending. I enjoyed it. Thnx for sharing. VOTED.

Thanks Robin! If you want me to read any of yours, let me know.

Very powerful story Ben...

I liked the way you kept it mysterious, hinting a little, but leaving the intrigue until the very end. Great job in putting this short story together. Good luck and best wishes.

CAV LASTER

Oh the joys of discovering your new future son in law! Great ending.

Again, thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate the feedback.

Really interesting story and extremely well written. I look forward to more books from this author.

Stephanie Brown