Betty,I really enjoyed your story. I spend a lot of time in fantasy land and I felt quite at home in your story thanks I loved it

Dear Robin and Joeparente,
I was bowled over by your generous comments! Thank you both so much!

Yes, I would like to try and publish a volume of short stories at a later date. However at present would prefer to spend time on writing new stuff and editing the old.

Here's wishing you both a very enjoyable day and once again thank you.

Best wishes
Betty

This is the most delightful thing I've read in a very long time Betty.
You've got yourself a 'hot commodity' here, if/when you decide how to get it published.
You have such a way with words...no matter what genre you choose to write in.
("codswallop" - snicker - you are brilliant!:)
I noticed a few places that could use a comma... but to me, those few little editing things seemed trivial compared to the magnitude of this enchanting story. It's perfect.

A very sincere 'thank you'...I needed this..:)

Robin

Absolutely perfect! I loved every moment of your story. If fact I am going to the produce market to buy a very large POMEGRANATE.
Joeparente Thanks for the story Betty.