IT WAS DIFFERENT,BUT IT ALSO WAS GOOD.

bella doesnt have a red lambroghini and in the book and movie edward never came back or gave her ny jewlery in fact he tried to wipe all memory from her she doesnt even talk like that and she always cared bout him thats why she was being reckless

its a good book you should writ a edwqard version of the story i wont baable to catch it maybe becazuse im in6th grade but send me a note when you make a new book

i like it. you should write more diary entries to. one thing to improve on though. theres no punctuation.

thats brilliant! you shouls write some more diary entries!

Sorry, but this book is terrible. I opened it because I like Twilight, and it had gotten two votes, so I thought it would be good. But there is absolutely no punctuation, capitalization, and the grammar is awful. The writing is gives unnecessary foresight, and is quite inaccurate at times. I don't understand why it has two votes.... I'm sorry that this sounds so harsh, but you can't improve unless you know what is wrong, right?

Refreshing

I didn't like the book sorry. It was because that didn't happen in the real book and I think that the people that like the Twilight saga won't like it either.