Yes in the end he made a great hero and your little stories were great. :)

Barry,

I really enjoyed your book. I wish you could write more. The story got good as it ended.

Excellent writing!

:) I REALLY ENJOYED IT !
*****

Very enjoyable drabble. It could make a great novel!

I wish there was more!! You have to post this in the 100 words drabble. Some things i would tweak if i were you is the beginning, i didn't fully understand what Jor was talking about until he said "i smelled you." Overall I really enjoyed this book. Keep writing, you have a gift:)

This is right up my alley. Good work.

I was definitely a little stumped in the beginning, but after that I got it!

Yes you should most definitely put this in a competition

Interesting. I was a bit confused at first, but that was quickly resolved. Exceptional work, I like it.

THAT WAS GREAT!!!!