So cute! I love it and thank you for telling me about this story! XD

You have out done yourself again.
Very funny!

Getting closer, and closer to that X rating all the time.

This is better than a cat, but not quite as funny.

Thanks for the firsts!

I love it so much its so funny :-)

A salacious tale of Kings and princesses, told with gentility and humor. This certainly would be dismissed by hardcore "eroticists" - but for people like me, who prefer to imagine rather than have sex thrown in my face, this naughty tale was witty, filled with Barry-like asides.

The story itself was GREAT. I especially loved the ending, which was unexpected yet satisfyingly appropriate.

You want feedback? OK. I said all the good stuff. Some of your commas are a little tipsy, appearing where they shouldn't, but I forgive you for those small lapses.

A story for grownups and children alike. Why kids, you ask? This is supposed to be a "naughty tale". Because they would not understand a word of it, and could hardly be traumatized by the content...that's why.

Great job, Barry. So glad you used no foul language or sexual acts to ruin my day. LOL.

Val

Your usual dry wit, has shown itself again, Barry, to good purpose.