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robbedbygreed

A touching story.Very well written, too.
Only your sentences someones got long and complicated.
But other than that, wow. I understand why you won the Life Memory Contest with this piece. Your father must have been a very good man.

---RbG

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arcane.weilder

This was so touching. Thank you for the recommendation.

I feel so sad now. You wrote this wonderfully and I can tell that it was from your heart.

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ivymarie15

I was very close to my dad.So this book made me feel allot of emotions, very touching. Thank you for sharing your story.

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Remembrance

Its horrible that he died! I feel soo bad for you and your siblings!! He seemed like a good man and this story made me cry. I don't get to see my dad much but books like these remind me to never stop loving him because he won't always be here!

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fools101

Awww that was touching!

~Jess~

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dav3455

Very touching, this is the first book I have read in this website since I just register today and have to say the book was beautiful....I'm a dad of 6 kids and only hope that one day my kids will see me as you seen your dad a "Super Hero"
thanks for writing this.

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kurt.1964

It was a nice story and brought back memories of my own father. Thanks for putting it out there.

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cierra55

wow I liked it I even cried.This story touched me alot.

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animator0123

Wow this was very touching Barry. A lot different then the other story's I've read. It was beautifully written like all the others, but i wish there was more. It's so interesting to me. I can't relate because my real dad well... he was never someone i looked up to.
Anyways, great work. I could picture all of it happening. You captured the moments you had with your father and told them to us wonderfully. Maybe you can't play... mehr anzeigen

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robustus

Would like to read more! I really enjoyed the book, you have it written with heart.

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