This story is so heart breaking. I feel so bad for devin's dad! :(
-Jude

But nothing's better than the honest reviews of authors who've earned such wide respect... and the nice notes of newbies who seem to have found this by chance.

You comment-ers are a perpetual Christmas present to me.

Thank you!

This is the second time I've read this & can't belive I didn't comment before. Sorry Barry, musta had a senior moment.

Love the story line, as is usual with Barry's stuff, it's well written and as an added bonus we get a fantastic twist at the end. Kudos for a well crafted bit of flash.

Carol x

Amazingly well done... makes me want to write a book about when I was younger....

THis is one of the books that I could actually sit down and read without having to be somewhere or do something... And that meant I could spend time actually understanding it and enjoying it. Great job on this Barry. Another impressive write.

I wish I could give you 2 hearts, but you will just have to sttle for this one instead:

<3

Love ya.

God Bless.

~Jazz

You make your stories come to life..I love reading your books.I am a fan of yours barry

This was so good...I like how you made the reader want more, and the more you read the more we want...:)

This was extremely well crafted with a great buildup to the final scene. As others have testified, Barry consistently shows remarkable creativity and always "delivers the goods." I may be green with envy at his skill, but happy to know that I can always draw inspiration from checking out anything that he comes up with.

That was a delight to read, Barry. So delicately put at the end how you found the truth, and came around to respect a man who walked out on you.

Thank you so much!

Resolution, another story packed with emotion. I love the characters in Barry's books, its hard to imagine them as fictitious, they draw you in. The story makes me inclined to think he is drawing from experience which is a skill id love to have. Brilliant