Hi Joe,
Thank you very much for your honest feedback! I know exactly what you mean about it feeling a bit short, I felt the same way and had actually planned on having 1 additional transformation somewhere in between, but decided to leave it out in order to meet the 20-page limit. :( I might add it back in and/or add to the current scenes once the BOW contest is over.
Once again, thank you for the constructive comments...I truly appreciate it.
Incognito

A bit wordy but mechanically correct. I have written plays myself and I found this one too short.
It's tough to write a play without character building. You did well for the short scenario./Joe

Interesting play and very telling scenarios with each scene shift. Excellent work!

A beautifully crafted satire on the financial situation, Gino! A professional playwright couldn't have done better! Hilarious as well! Petra :))