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lazarus67

Wonderful...Just loved it.

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I definitely was NOT expecting that ending. Great incorporation of the song lyrics and an excellent story!

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augustus

Thank you Verse5,
I belong to a writing group. Four of the women in the group are in their 70's and 80's and they all love kitties. They were my inspiration for this fun story.

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I wasn't expecting that at all, Augustus! What a great story! I hope this is a contest entry ... you're a shoe-in for sure!
Hugs to you for a job well-done,
CJ

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felixthecat

What was I expecting there at the end? I hadn't a clue! Michael, you are the King:) THAT was so well-written in every way. I loved it!

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xmeli.j.nightlyx

Such a mischievous sweetie...

Yeah I was trying to rhyme. Eunice reminds me of my grandma! I loved it!

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Chris-Jean

Great story. Well penned.
Chris

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paulashene

know this song - I'm on my way to check it out - thank you for my continuing education - and oh, yes, loved the story!

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staceydoss

Good twist! Very realistic, too.

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staceydoss

Good twist! Very realistic, too.

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gooduklady

Very well done, Michael. I love your use of a kitty...ha ha...great minds think alike, right? Did not expect YOUR ending either. Smiles, Valerie

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