I like it is an amazing novel you should make a sequal!!

hey it's Bethany!! READ THIS BOOK it's only 10 pages and very good

this book is awesome

this book is awesome

this book is awesome

This story touches close to my heart. I once had an older brother who died when he was six moths old from sids my mother always put his picture next to my bed and said hed always watch me as i slept to keep me safe thank you for this.

this book is a very good book people should read it

Hi Jade,
If you clean up the spelling mistakes and improve your grammar, this short story of yours would shine.
Laz

Keep writing and you'll go far! Great book!!