It's like a Nicholas Sparks book, but not nearly as long. Just as sweet though, and with enough background it's not too rushed. I love it!

really cute story

Such a good story :)

That story was touching in so many ways. For one it showed how some relationships seem to be compromised because the two in love have nithing in common. This story goes to show that everybody has something in common. Of you need something in common with the person you love here's one: We are humans and we all make mistakes.

that was a cute lil story. even though i think it could have been a little longer and kept the reader guessing a little more. it just seems to me that the story unravaled a little to fast but it was sweet non the less, something really nice and refreshing to read

please Countinue it was a good book!

please Countinue it was a good book!

awww thiis book iis beautiful... post moree SOON.... :D

A nice read. Thank you.
Mary

Cute, but I believe it needed just a bit more details.
Your story is mostly dialogue..... some authors hate it when they have to describe scenes or the actual plotline without words being exchanged between character and other prefer dialogue- lots and lots of dialogue.
You're the later.
It's always good to have a balanced- or slightly unbalanced- story with dialogue and description. Doesn't make the readers confused or annoyed- it helps inform them about past memories or feelings between a group or two people.

Build your plot and expand a bit more, the ending seemed a bit unrealistic.

ALso! You might want to leave a space at the beginning of every paragraph, as it gets confusing as to which character is speaking at times.

Bad review, eh? I enjoyed the story- it was cute- but you need to work on your downfalls!

~Non.graceful

(I joined this website a couple of days ago and I don't really know if you guys send each other hate-mail or whatever, so either way, DON'T send it to me.)